Is this a good essay on essays, can you please proofread/give suggestions?

I think Bill Watterson would get a kick out of reading this. There is huge potential for logical fallacies, i.e. you say whatever you want in your thesis right, "Therefore the USA is the only country with a proper education system in place" and then use the predesignated amount of words to prove your point, but you never actually prove it. You simply throw in whatever facts support your claims and leave out whatever doesn't. It's not a reliable source of information because you tailor it however you want. I was a literature student, if you like literature but want to learn to hate it then major in it. You can never enjoy a book or movie again, because the whole time you read or watch it you're taking notes and planning out how you can write an essay that will get you a high mark, usually done by matching the professor's opinion of the author or work and parroting back whatever garbage they spewed about it.